viernes, 30 de enero de 2009

write the story











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  1. picture 4:

    Once upon a time, the world was ,made by really simple figures, this was really amazing becuase, we were tinny and our head was like ball; we were really happy then a really extrange figure was born, his body was like us, and that was completly normal, but his head was so extrange we never saw things like that, it was a square, when he was born i was 3 years old, and the thing was that his birth was like a gossip, they thought that his mother hide themselves, because that would be too scary.

    When i was 10 years old i went down to the woods, to the forest, and i saw like a house, so i get in because i had never seen a house in the woods, it was pretty, then i listened a voice, it was a male voice then i listened him crying and i was so worried that i went to the place he was, he was just a kid, and he has his head like a square, and then a realize that that wasn't a myth.

    I asked what is wrong?, and he told me arent you scared?, well i was a little bit scare but he was crying and i couldnt think of anything else, he told me my mom left me, i just realized today and i am so hurt that I cant stop crying, well stop crying i would stay here with you, then i woke up and i realized that i still in that place...

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  2. PICTURE 3:

    "THE BEST FRIENDS"
    Once upon a time in a prestige university were 4 best friends that they were always having a lot of fun, they were called: Karla, Fabiola, Alba and Janette.

    When the big party of the university was coming up, the best year party called the Shiny Students, they were getting ready since one month because only the cool ones go to that party.

    One day this 4 best friends were shopping at the University Mall and they saw a really nice girl. Janette and Karla said that they had seen that girl in their classroom. Alba told them that they were confused with another girl. That the one of the table wasn't on their classroom. So Janette and Karla insist a lot and tell them wait for us a second we are going to personally ask the girl. So they went to the table were that girl was drinking a bottle of juice.

    Fabiola was really surprised because imagine what everybody will think of Janette. She was talking with a really freak girl. Alba was all oh my god is she the loser one?

    When Janette arrived with her best friends. She told them that if they can integrate one more girl with them. Obviousely all were with a face of come on Janette you are freaking me out. This was only beacuse that girl the one that was at the table with a bottle of juice was a nerd, quiet and with a square head.

    They accept and the 4 of them start knowing the freak girl, she was named Natasha. Two days before the party they ask them to Natasha if she would want to go with them to the party. Natasha accepts and they knew that Natasha was really cool. But only because of the accident Natasha had when she was 2 years old. This square head made seemed Natasha as a freak. Everybody know Natasha and the boys want them to meet her.

    The message of this story is that physicall appearance is not everything, first meet people and know them of interests, or know them with your good manners.

    by, janette velasco durazo

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  3. edna your story is really cool, but i think that instead of picture 4 is 3, maybe im wrong :) but you have a lot of imaginantion that's cool. ciao love you =)

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  4. i really like your story janette, and i think the messege is very true. never guide for the appearances :)

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  5. picture 2 :

    One day there was a guy that he thought he had everything in his life, he couldn't ask for anything else. He got a fortune, a big house, nice cars and everything glamorous you can imagine.

    This guy thought he would have everything for the rest of his life. One close friend that he had, but he didn't take too much care of him, one day decided to talk to him because the attitude of the rich guy was very negative and didn't notice that one day without noticing he could lose everything he has, but the rich guy didn't pay him too much attention.

    One day the rich guy confront a situation. one little kid ask him if he can help him giving him some money to eat, the rich guy told him to go away and to don't bother, sadly the little kid went away. While the friend of the rich guy saw all the situation, talked to him another time and told him to put in the kids situation but again he pay no attention.

    One morning the rich guy wake up very early feeling really strange until he noticed that he wasn't at his house, he didn't had his clothes and everything was changed. All the situations came to his mind and he couldn't stand with them, he felt his head out of place. He went to talk to his friend asking for help, after some time the rich guy went to his normal life but with a new attitude. Know he was a kind man, with feelings and no hardness.
    you never know what other people feel until you go through their own situation.

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  6. thanks for your comment diana,. Your story is very true too diana.

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  7. i like your story janette, and obviously is talking of you and your closest friends, i like the story, it has a good message.

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  8. diana is really cool your story because it represent many ways of life among the social classes.

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  9. edna I liked very much your story, the creativity and that it's wrote on first person, it's pretty good

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  10. diana and janette i liked that your stories had a message. And both of them are true because we don't have to judge people before knowing them, and we have to treat well every person, they had feelings and rights, and no one is more than the other.

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  11. picture 1:

    Franck was a 13 year-old boy whose biggest dream was to become a movie director, but it was no more than a dream, something that he was sure he could never reach. First of all because he lived in a small town where if you wantes to study arts you had 2 options: to go and study out of there, or study at the local university and end as the art teacher of the high school. And he couldn't go to study to another city because his family hadn't the economic possibilities for that. That's why he felt so small and useless in the world of the arts.

    Time passed faster than he could ever imagine, and suddenly he was on high school. At the time of choosing the extracurricular activity, even arts was a very predjuiced subject, he went there without thinking about it twice, because it was something that he loved and he knew he had got talent for that. Everybody in that class notice his passion and talent for directing, and he become one of the bests and favourites of the class and the teacher. He made great friendship with his classmates, but specially with the teacher, he saw on Franck great talent and gave him his first opportunities at the school productions. There was when Franck doscovered that he'd got even more talent that what he thought, and he started to feel bigger in front of his dream.

    Time passed even faster than in junior high, and there was closer the date of the graduation and a big desition for Franck to take, what to study?, which university?, so many doubts and so less answers. What he wanted the most was to study cinematography, but it was such a cheap career, and his parents couldn't pay for that. But one day he recieved a letter from the London University of Arts, where they offered him a scholarshio to study cinematography, he felt the happiest person in the world, thanks to his art teacher that was who send the University a Franck's video. He accept the scholarship without thinking about it twice. He was so close to see his dream come to reality, he felt big and confident of himslef, all this time wondering for that and being so close to reach what he was especting all of his life.

    So the big they came, Franck graduated with honors like a director from the London University of Arts, with all the effort and passion not only from him, but from all his family he become what he always wanted to be. and that day he felt the biggest and complete person in the world. And he learned something, it doesn't matter how far and small you feel from your goal. The closer you are, the bigger you feel.

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  12. Edna I really enjoy your story. It has a lot of creativity. The most important thing for me is that the boy of your story doesn't get importance to the fisic of the other guy that was alone in that house. The boy try to help him even though he has a square head.

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  13. Janette I enjoy your story too. I think sometimes we do that, we do not get together with some people because we think that they are freaks or something like that without knowing them. We should think more about that and see what is inside each person.

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  14. Diana your story is very cool. Everything you write about is true. We don't think in the problems of other persons until we have that problems. We should be nice persons at everytime, not only when we are in the places of other persons.

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  15. Patti your story is my favorite!! I think you remember me becuase I want to be director of movies. And maybe that will happen to me :) ok no! That would not happen to me, today I'm little but maybe tomorrow I'm very big, like in your story. I like that that has to be the attitude of every person, you never have to feel little.

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  16. Picture 4:

    Once upon a time there was a little boy called Jacobo. He was a bery good person. He respext a lot his parents and his brothers and sisters. He also respect his teachers and the most imporant thing is that he has very good grades. He seem to be a perfect boy but he had a problem. He was too dedicated to school that he doesn't have friends.

    He was always doing homeworks and in his weekends he was always reading books. When he was at school, at the time of recess he was reading books too.

    Her parents always told him to go out once a time with his friends, that it wasn't good to be always at her house. We was like in a box with books, rulers, pencils and stuff of school.

    At the middle of the school year a very nice girl enter to the classroom of Jacobo. She was new in the city and she was going to be in that school, in the classroom of Jacobo. Jacobo was amezed because the girl called Vanessa was very beautiful. All the classmates of Jacobo see that Jacobo was changing. At the recess of school he was no more reading books, he was always talking with Vanessa. The parents of Jacobo also see that Jacobo was changing.

    Months pass and Jacobo fall in love with Vanessa. Vanessa was the one that help Jacobo to go out of that box of school.

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  17. patty i liked your story, and flora your story is based in some people i know ok both of them are cool. And girls tnaks for your comments about my story. NICE TEAM =)

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  18. better late than never, so sorry Mr. C!
    picture 2!

    Once upon a time there was two best friends who enojoy talking and critizing anyone else.
    There seem to be no problem between each other becuase they never fight nor disagree. There names where Ralph and Lauren and together they really make a good chemistry, I mean they where an excelent couple.

    One day Lauren told one friend of them named Angela that Ralph was too conceited, that thougly was devastating for him because he consider him his best friend. So Ralph went with Lauren and told him that what was the problem, but Lauren nodded everything, he said that everything was a lie.

    Finally he said he liked Angela and it was not his fault to want more attention from her, Ralp told him he was loosing his head just for a girl. Lauren said actually yes and his head fell down.!

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  19. Janette I really like your story it is very nice and lovely, It remembers me:P, just kidding but i really enjoy reading it and the message is very important for everyone to notice!

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  20. Diana you story inspired me to write with the same picture, y love moracles and how you managed it to put in others people shoes before judging!

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