martes, 10 de febrero de 2009

walking (blog assignament #3)


We might walk to follow someone, to follow your shadow, or to share a time with a person.


Once upon a time, in a far away forest existed a little girl, she was 6 years old, while she was playing in forest a mysterios accident happen, no one now exactly what had happened, everyone knowed about this story except for a new family that wasn't absorbed by the general customs around the village. One day one girl around 16 years old, that a was a former of the new family went down to the woods, she was amazed of the beauty of that place, it was amazing, then she realized that there were a little girl, a blonde one, she was playing with some stones, then the big girl told hi, and the little girl smiled like if she was the only one that could noticed her.


They started talking, and the first question was, waht are you doing here? the little gilr answered once in while you need to scape form reality that is what i'm doing, and the old girl was like, this gilr is too mature for her age, where do you live? i live where pieces are broken, in her mind she was thinking this is kind of scary, and then the little girl spoke, do you want to join me?, because the reality is that i am lonly, i dont know what happened to me, i just remeber and old lady pulling me to go with her, she was really amazing she was blonde but her speaking was like of and ancient lady; then the old girl realized that she might be crazy, or that the little gilr, was kidding her, or that she was a real.


All her family started to worried about her, because she was vanished, they never saw her again, they began to asked to the people in the town and they told her, that once a little kid got lost and never returned, because she was mistery, that a the legend of the town, saids that, once in while a person who visisted the woods dissapear, because they need to be guide to another place, because they didnt feat on that place.


Years passed and the girl never appear, when the family went to the woods found a picture of two blonde girls walking, and beside it an scripture We might walk to follow someone, to follow your shadow, or to share a time with a person; then the family realized that the history was true, tehn they saw the old girl and asked about everything just to have company, then she asked to join them, when they joined her they found that there were another place, a place more extrange that we could ever imagine.....

3 comentarios:

  1. I really enjoy your story Edna, I think is to sad but interesting at the sametime and i still hope that they will find her someday

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  2. your story is very good, is interesting and let me a message :')

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